She lay sprawled across the bed like fondant rolling down the form of a cake, one arm and leg draping down the side, ... Her body was nothing more than an empty form, holding a space she’d once inhabited.
Enjoyed ! Now I want to find out what he did or said that will result in him being implicated. Also want to see if the French policewoman becomes a hero. I may be going way down the wrong rabbit hole but it should be fun to find out. Happy Valentine's Day.
It did read quite naturally... and I agree, sometime this method can be jolting. and on this note.... HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! egads! This was dark. I haven't read Frankenstein, but I remember that you enjoyed it and something about this made me remember it (even not having read it) so that must have been successful! I think the picture was perfect! The final scene when we see her rearranged and covered reminded me of that statue of Christ covered https://i.pinimg.com/736x/d6/6b/62/d66b626cd7a04b31ad9ee0c29cbe1e40--king-photo-naples-italy.jpg
Enjoyed ! Now I want to find out what he did or said that will result in him being implicated. Also want to see if the French policewoman becomes a hero. I may be going way down the wrong rabbit hole but it should be fun to find out. Happy Valentine's Day.
Doug
It did read quite naturally... and I agree, sometime this method can be jolting. and on this note.... HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! egads! This was dark. I haven't read Frankenstein, but I remember that you enjoyed it and something about this made me remember it (even not having read it) so that must have been successful! I think the picture was perfect! The final scene when we see her rearranged and covered reminded me of that statue of Christ covered https://i.pinimg.com/736x/d6/6b/62/d66b626cd7a04b31ad9ee0c29cbe1e40--king-photo-naples-italy.jpg
Hahahah happy valentines day!! Nothing cheerier than a newly wed being murdered by her husband …. 🫣😆.
Glad it read natural!!
And also, what an amazing statue! Wow!!